Hello A quick message just to let you know this has been featured in MY JOURNALL under the "Twos better then one" Section of it. Please take a few mins to take a look at the other art featured in my journal too, feedback on art is helpful
other than a few technical issues this is one of the most interesting images I have seen in a long time. well thought out. and has a lot to offer on many different levels. Irony, juxapositon, social commentary, etc.
ok some of this is subjective... 1. the "american gothic" print is not parallel to the frame of the image, but not enough to make me believe it is deliberate. I looks like a mistake. 2.) in the same "plane" the horizon line of the bed is also "just a bit off" but not enough to make me feel like it was thought out. 3. your High Key is blown out. (on my spyder calibrated apple cinema display) I loose the definition of the pillows and the bedspead. As I see this the whole point of the models is to break the symetry of the image. With the laptops skewed, and her leaning over, it adds humanity and dynamic to the scene. Ok there you go. I still love this!